Ethans Profile
Capturing a beautiful outfit in front of him is one of
Ethan’s favorite things to do. While most teenagers have many pictures on our
phones and devices, Ethan takes photography to another level. Most teenage boys
won’t have a single thought about photography or even fashion for that matter,
Ethan on the other hand is so involved its became a hobby of his. He believes
that clothing and fashion gives you the opportunity to express your own
personality and show yourself off. Having a passion for something most kids
hide about themselves is really inspiring. Besides taking pictures, Ethan does have a real teenage
boy style. He is really into cars, and he really enjoys working on said cars.
His favorite type of car is the JDM model. JDM stands for “Japanese Domestic
Market”, Ethan likes to go for a sporty yet foreign vibe when it comes to vehicles.
I find this very interesting. I think for a lot of teen boys their style is a huge thing to them and then at the same time you've got boys who only post baby photos of themselves. I like that Ethan isn't afraid to express his style through photography.
ReplyDeleteI rally like this article and that i got to know ethan a little more.
ReplyDeleteI found this paper fun to read, as a lot of guys don't share their like for fashion so openly. I like where you took this paper and look forward to seeing more of your work!
ReplyDeleteAye mate. This was really well written. I'd just recommend to maybe fancy up the intro a little bit. It'll hook the audience a lot more. Great job though!
ReplyDeleteI like the hobbies you included! It's interesting to hear a different side of the typical boy lifestyle. Having better transitions would make this whole thing flow better!
ReplyDeleteI agree w Syke. Maybe you could use a better opening to really capture more peoples attention. Other than that it was really well written and it definitely shows who Ethan is.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story, but there was room for a stronger lead, and better transitions. I liked the things you said about him and his hobbies though.
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty good article, but you could go for another paragraph. I can see that there is some room for branching out a bit. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThank you for a few more facts about Ethan. I dont really know him very well and now know a few thing about him.
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